Revision_Memo_Assignment

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To: Kathryn Dunlap From: [your name here] Subject: Unit Paper [#] Revision Memo Date: [date]

First, I need you to address your understanding of the assignment and how (if at all) your understanding of the paper has changed and developed. Try to give me some details and I’ll need to see specific examples. Remember, I’ll be using this memo to help me reevaluate your paper.

Secondly, I’d like you to explain how generally you approached this revision and what general changes you made. Did you introduce a new theme into the paper? Reorganize the structure? Add or subtract large sections? Rework the introduction and conclusion? Edit within the already existing paragraphs? Try to mention all of these general moves that you’ve done. Bear in mind that if you just add and change elements on a sentence-by-sentence level, it is unlikely that you will be able to significantly improve your paper.

Thirdly, I need you to explain several specific examples of the types of changes you made, why you made them, and how you feel they've impacted your paper overall. You will not have to list all of them, and please don’t list any changes made for sentence clarity or grammar correctness.